Tuesday, 22 November 2016

Tuesday, 15 November 2016

Monday, 14 November 2016

Feedback from TA and teachers



This is a video, of a collection of opinion and feedback which we have received for out first initial idea, our first treatment. Overall, we have received a positive response from the people we have asked. However, some people did not thin that the treatment was as good as others did. Based on the good and bad response which we have received we are not able to improve our plan for the music video and we will write a second amended treatment. Doing this blog task has helped us deeply, create a better treatment which appals to the chosen target audience better. 

Thursday, 10 November 2016

Treatment Feedback

Treatment Feedback:

1. What's your thought on the general storyline of the music video?
2. Do you think there is a strong connection between the lyrics and the visuals
3. Does the music video suit the genre? (Pop)
4. Do you think five different location is enough?
5.  Do you think the video makes it clear whose perspective is being shown?
6. What other visual effects would you suggest for us to use?
7. Do you find London relatable to the audience?
8. Do you have any comments or suggestions on how to improve?
9. Lastly, based on the treatment would you interested in watching our music video?

Monday, 7 November 2016

Question 2 - Evaluation